HE MIGHT STILL BE ON MARS by Paul Dalzell-a review

HE MIGHT STILL BE ON MARS by Paul Dalzell-a review

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ABOUT THE BOOK: Release Date April 24, 2020

He Might Still Be On Mars is a thriller set in the latter years of the 26th Century. Mankind has spread out into the rocky planets of the Solar System and the rocky moons of the Gas Giants such as Jupiter and Saturn. Despite light speed and near light speed travel, the number of people emigrating to these new worlds is in the doldrums.
This lack of enthusiasm is driven primarily by the savagery of raids by pirate chief, Wilson Black. Powerful politician and scientist, Stella Ling, sends Owen Bone and his Synthetic partner Sandi Shaw on a manhunt for an absconded husband, Freddie Ling. This is camouflage for a plan to eliminate Wilson Black. Owen and Sandi are subject to terrifying injuries and stresses that test what it means to be human and Synth. In overcoming these challenges, they find help in the most unlikely places, leading to a showdown with Black in the frozen remote taiga forest of Siberia.

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REVIEW: HE MIGHT STILL BE ON MARS by Paul Dalzell is an adult, sci-fi stand alone story of suspense focusing on galactic bounty hunter Owen Bone, and his synthetic partner (synth), an artificial intelligence being named Sandi Shaw.

NOTE: Due to the nature of the story line content, there may be some triggers for more sensitive readers.

Told from first person perspective (Owen Bone) HE MIGHT STILL BE ON MARS is set in the year 2586 wherein millions of people have emigrated to a number of the planets in the solar system, planets that have been augmented to sustain human life but like present day Earth, there remains the political wars, racial tension, specieism, classism, discrimination, and evil that break the laws, and perpetrate heinous crimes upon innocent victims. Owen Bone is a renowned bounty hunter who has been hired by the wife of a missing Chinese billionaire but our hero will soon discover his real target is an intergalactic space pirate, a cyborg whose methods are dangerous and often fatal. As Owen begins his hunt for Wilson Black, our hero will amass a posse of powerful politicians, scientists, thieves, hunters and his own band of pirates in an effort to stop the man who intends to stop them all.

HE MIGHT STILL BE ON MARS is a slow building story in which we are witness to the numerous attacks against Owen Bone; his ill-fated capture, imprisonment and eventual rescue; and his dogged determination to take down Wilson Black. From Mars to the frozen tundra of Siberia, Russia HE MIGHT STILL BE ON MARS pulls the reader into a galactic journey; a hunt and rescue; a take down and capture; a story of love, life (artificial, real or a combination thereof): revelations and retribution; a little bit of Star Wars ala Han Solo episodes 4, 5, & 6 😉 , Star Trek Total Recall and Babylon 5. There is plenty of scientific and fictional terminology-prepare to be transported to a world that is but a dream – or- nightmare  away.

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Reviewed by Sandy

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Everything Hurts (Jack Bone Detective Series #2) by Paul Dalzell-a review

EVERYTHING HURTS (Jack Bone Detective Series #2) by Paul Dalzell-a review

Everything Hurts

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ABOUT THE BOOK: Release Date October 9, 2014

Jack Bone is on the trail of a serial killer; a killer the police don’t believe exists. The killer targets young girls who are single off spring and coerces them to overdose with heroin. Bone is able to call on his Nosferatu or vampire allies Lucy and Mina to help track the killer, but on the way Bone falls foul of a vicious criminal he’d locked up in the past, a Jamaican Yardie Gang, a major drug dealer and South African mercenaries. Bone also has to contend with the Grand Duchess of Transylvania, vampire royalty and great grandmother to Lucy and Mina. All the while Bone is missing his vampire girlfriend Alice who has gone to Iceland to do some serious thinking about their relationship.

The case becomes personal when the niece of Bone’s friend is targeted by the serial killer, which leads to Bone and the girl taking refuge in Lucy and Mina’s home town of Wolfston, only to be entombed underground with little prospect of rescue. But nothing stops Bone in his pursuit of the serial killer, except that the killer has some nasty surprises in store for Jack. It might be Bone who ends up another victim and not the avenger of the dead girls murdered by the serial killer.

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REVIEW: EVERYTHING HURTS is the second installment in Paul Dalzell’s adult, contemporary JACK BONE paranormal, mystery thriller series focusing on retired police detective Jack Bone. Jack’s continuing story finds our reluctant hero on the trail of a serial killer who searches for young women with a love for Jane Austen storylines.

The premise follows private investigator Jack Bone as he is tasked with uncovering the truth behind a series of mysterious heroin overdoses covering a seven year span. Each victim is female; an only child; never previously had an issue with drugs; and a young woman with an interest in Victoria literature. Enter Detective Nolan, a police officer who recognizes the signs of a serial killer but a man who has been ignored by those in charge. As Jack Bone sets out to uncover the truth, his new supernatural friends from Wolfston are beside him every step of the way.

From terrorists to drug smugglers and international ‘guns for hire’, EVERYTHING HURTS follows a two-pronged path. Jack has become the target of a former felon seeking revenge for his time in prison; and when the most recent heroin overdose does not result in death, Jack and the victim are targeted for extermination by South African mercenaries.

The secondary and supporting characters include most of the previous storyline players including exotic Nosferatu twins Mina and Lucy and their parents Silas and Nadia Laughton : Jack’s secretary Deborah Cakewell; Count Vladimir Lucard ; Dr. Jonathon Van Helsing and his wife Charlotte; Grand Duchess Eugenie; and Mina and Lucy’s extended family of vampires and ancients. We are introduced to Maggie Pritchard, the serial killer’s latest target and a woman whose family is connected to organized crime as well as Detective Brian Nolan-the man who tasked Jack with uncovering the truth.

The world building continues to reveal the secrets behind the immortal city of Wolfston, England and the Nosferatu families who live and work behind the veiled walls. There are moments of graphic imagery and violence, action, suspense and mystery as well as a trip back down memory lane. Jack’s friendship and familiarity with the Nosferatu is akin to respect, family and love.

Paul Dalzell weaves a fascinating and imaginative tale; a contemporary thriller with a touch of the past; an intimate look at a family of vampires whose lives continue to cross paths with the dramatic and profound. The unfolding storyline will capture your imagination, compelling you to move forward and arousing your senses-you never know if you will be caught in a web of Nosferatu seduction.

Series Reading Order
1. The Last Dream Before You Die
2. Everything Hurts

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Reviewed by Sandy

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Paul Dalzell-Interview and Giveaway with the Author

PAUL DALZELL-Interview with the Author
The Reading Cafe would like to welcome the author of THE LAST DREAM BEFORE YOU DIE-Paul Dalzell

TRC: Hi Paul and welcome to The Reading Café. We would like to start with some background information. Would you please tell us something about yourself?

Paul: I’m originally from England, and am now a US citizen, as is my wife who is from Papua New Guinea. I am a fisheries scientist and work for a federal organization that develops fishery management policy for Hawaii and other US Pacific Islands like Guam and American Samoa.

TRC: Your author information states that you are originally from the UK, have travelled extensively through the South Pacific and Southeast Asia, and now reside in Hawaii. Wow. Were your travels for business or pleasure? And what was your decision to settle in Hawaii?

Paul: My fascination for the South Seas and Pacific islands stems from an early age and the great Victorian novel, ‘The Coral Island’ by R. M. Ballantyne. I’ve been very lucky that my career has taken me to so many different places in the Pacific Islands and Southeast Asia. I have lived in Papua New Guinea, Philippines, New Caledonia and now Hawaii. I loved working in New Caledonia (a French territory) where I would travel all over the South Pacific assisting fisheries managers and scientists with their work. However, I was always a contractual employee and it was the lure of a permanent job in Hawaii that made me apply to work here. I had also been to Hawaii several times and really liked the place for its diverse cultures and I knew my wife would be happy here also where Pacific Islands and Asian cultures intermingle.

TRC: What challenges have you faced as an author?

Paul: Learning a whole new trade! I have authored numerous scientific papers and reports, but fiction was a whole new ball game with its own rules and conventions, and whole new community of authors, agents and publishers. I was lucky to take a fiction writers workshop with the author William Bernhardt, who besides being an accomplished writer, is also a great teacher. Bill’s lessons and guidance were instrumental in my being able to develop as a fiction writer. I tend not to suffer too much from writers block, but I can be very indolent, sometimes preferring to mess around with my guitars. The toughest thing for me to write about was the female characters in the book and their relationships with each other and with the male characters. Getting this right was crucially important since at the core of the book are Jack Bone and the three Nosferatu girls.

TRC: THE LAST DREAM BEFORE YOU DIE is your first novel in the Jack Bone Detective series. Would you please tell us something about the premise of this novel?

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Paul: It’s no secret that vampires have been such a strong element of pop culture for quite a while with Buffy the Vampire Slayer, the Twilight Saga, True Blood, The Vampire Diaries, Underworld. I could probably spend all day listing examples! The chauvinistic Englishmen in me wanted to repatriate the story to England, where much of Dracula took place and also to set it in and around my home town of Leeds which is not far from the Brontë parsonage at Haworth. I wanted to pitch an ordinary guy into extraordinary circumstances over which he had little control. The scientist in me also wanted to explore the back story to vampirism, relating it as much as possible to real natural phenomena. I also wanted to use the term ‘Nosferatu’ as an homage to the eponymous film with the great Max Schreck, which still creeps me out today. And, as in the book, I am amazed at why this small, damp overcrowded island at Europe’s edge continues to be a magnet for so many immigrants, many of whom are smuggled in illegally and at great risk to themselves.

TRC: How much research was involved in the writing of this series?

Paul: Thank God for the internet! I spent a great deal of time in researching the historical characters that appear in the book and researching all of the various vampire myths. I even unearthed a master’s thesis on the vampire in detective fiction. Google Earth and Google maps were invaluable in getting the geography of the book right. I don’t think you can do too much research, but also be constantly on the alert for anything that might fit in with or improve the story. The village of Eyam for example was the feature of a PBS documentary and was aired just when I was beginning the story and so was a perfect fit for the story.

TRC: Did you have to travel back to the UK for any of the local flavor added to the storyline?

Paul: I go back to England every 3-4 years and my last trip back to England was in 2008, a year before I began work on this story. I have several books about Leeds and its surroundings that helped, and I speak to my mother in Leeds every week so I could fact check with her on local detail. It also helped that as a student I’d worked in factories not too dissimilar to the mill in the book so I could draw on these experiences for background.

TRC: Many different characters are introduced in The Last Dream Before You Die, including the Laughton’s and their extended family. Will the Laughton’s figure prominently in the continuing series of novels?

Paul: Yes, in the next book I plan to explore the Laughton and the Lucard families further, and the core characters from these families plus Alice Perkins will continue to feature prominently.

TRC: Will we see a love interest develop more thoroughly for Jack Bone in the upcoming storylines?

Paul: Good question! Still thinking about it! It’s got so many angles, a late middle aged man and a teenage girl has a strong icky factor (shades of Lolita), but then the Nosferatu girl is almost two centuries old so she’s the elder and he the younger despite the physical appearances to the contrary. That’s a fascinating theme. Plus lovers’ tiffs and squabbles take on a new meaning when your lover can literally tear you limb from limb. But in any case Bone and his relationship to Alice will continue to develop.

TRC: You have used many Nosferatu references from various storylines and lore. Why did you choose to link the Laughton’s and their family to some of the more famous and infamous literary characters (real or undead)?

Paul: This occurred through a mix of geography, literature and inspiration. Geography in that the plot takes place in the Peninne hills and near Haworth, so the Brontë’s almost wrote themselves into the book. Bram Stoker’s Dracula is of course the most famous vampire novel and it was while researching Stoker I found out about his day job as Henry Irving’s acting and business manager. Irving’s company travelled widely and that they would have played big cities

Like Leeds and Bradford and this presented an opportunity to work Stoker into the story and connect Wolftson with the Dracula novel. Having a Russian people smuggling gang in the book and thinking about the Nosferatu hypnotic powers sparked a link in my head that led to Rasputin.

TRC: Would you please tell us something about the premise of the next novel in the Jack Bone Detective series? Do you have an anticipated date of release?

Paul: I don’t have an anticipated release date for the next book. I have a working title, ‘Everything Hurts’, and it involves the hunt for a pedophile serial killer who may be a Nosferatu.

TRC: What difficulties did you face getting your novel published e.g. research? Logistics?

Paul: I went the self publishing route because I spent about two years trying to go the traditional route of getting an agent and eventually being published. Friends of mine from the writer’s workshop took the self publishing route which convinced me to follow their lead. Once I was on that path I realized it’s more expensive than it first appears, however, I have no regrets. The research was fun; I write for a living with fish and fisheries, so it was great to branch out and explore a whole range of new disciplines and ideas.

TRC: What or who inspired you to write your first novel? Do you have a specific style of writing?

Paul: I am really inspired by my two writing classmates Heather McCorkle (Secret of Spruce Knoll; To Ride a Pύca) and Karlene Petitt (Flight for Control) who have published their books and shown me the way forward. I think my day job, which requires writing technical documents that formulate arguments in favor of a policy direction or interpretation of scientific results, has been helpful in developing my writing style. With respect to fiction writing I have read widely and like mystery and thriller writers like Dick Francis and Robert Parker. If I had to pick one author that I find continually inspirational it would be Ian Fleming and the James Bond novels. I love his clear, lucid prose style, and the economy with which he can describe a character or set a scene. Further, the Bond of the novels, despite the glamour and heroics, is actually rather a sad lonely character and to be able to convey that in these thrillers is to me the mark of a very skilled writer. Although he was a non-fiction writer and journalist, I am also a great admirer of the later Christopher Hitchens who again has a wonderfully eloquent writing style that I would recommend to authors of either fiction or non-fiction.

TRC: Many authors bounce information and ideas with each other and family members or friends. With whom do you bounce ideas?

Paul: I have a friend in Canada with whom I have collaborated on a full length comic thriller and some short stories, and with whom I discuss a few ideas. Another friend in Hawaii is an expert on military history and weapons so I pick his brain from time to time to make sure I’m not getting any arms and ammunition facts wrong. I also sent Last Dream out for a professional review which was massively helpful and revealed key story weaknesses. Apart from that I don’t generally bounce ideas of friends for fear of boring them!

TRC: On what are you currently working?

Paul: I have five or six completed short stories and novella length tales which need revisiting. I have a few chapters of the Last Dream sequel drafted, and I’ve drafted a few chapters of a potential virtual history/steam punk novel with a working title ‘Pax Britannica.’ There’s also a jointly authored manuscript with my Canadian friend called ‘The Friends of Eddy Relish’, which I’d like to see out in print. It’s a dark comic thriller with what we thought at the time were outlandish plots and scenarios, but many of which have come true.

TRC: Would you like to add anything else?

Paul: As this is my first book I can only repeat what I have experienced which is you can never have too many revisions and reviews of your work, and if are serious about writing a thriller/mystery novel then sign up for a writers workshop with Bill Bernhardt, it will be money well spent!

LIGHTNING ROUND

Favorite Food
Steak and salad

Favorite Dessert
Crème Caramel

Favorite TV Show
House, Dr Who, South Park, UK Top Gear

Favorite Movie
Citizen Kane, Night of the Hunter, The Fantastic Mr. Fox

Last Movie you saw
Abraham Lincoln vampire hunter, but looking forward to seeing Moonrise Kingdom (I’m a huge Wes Anderson fan)

Dark or Milk Chocolate
Milk Chocolate

Favorite Car
Don’t drive, but as a small kid growing up in England I always loved the over-the-top late 50s Cadillacs, fins and all.

Do you have any pets?
Sadly no, we live in a small condo apartment.

TRC:Thank you Paul for taking the time to answer our questions. It is always a pleasure to meet the person behind the author and the book. Good luck with your writing career. We wish you all the best.

Paul is offering TWO lucky members at The Reading Cafe the opportunity to win a copy of his new release THE LAST DREAM BEFORE YOU DIE.

ONE paper copy and ONE e-copy (international) to be awarded

1. You MUST be a member at The Reading Cafe. If you are not a member, please join by using the log-in at the top of the page, or by using one of the social log-ins.

2. If you are using one of the social log-ins, please post your email address with your comment, as Twitter etc does not allow for email information and we will contact all potential winners via email.

3. PLEASE ANSWER ONE OF THE LIGHTNING ROUND QUESTIONS

4. ONE e-copy will be available internationally. ONE paper copy will be available to continental USA and Canada only.

5. The contest runs from August 13 to August 16, 2012.

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THE LAST DREAM BEFORE YOU DIE by Paul Dalzell-a review

THE LAST DREAM BEFORE YOU DIE by Paul Dalzell-a review

THE LAST DREAM BEFORE YOU DIE (Jack Bone Detective Series) by Paul Dalzell

THE LAST DREAM BEFORE YOU DIE is the first novel (April 2012 release) in Paul Dalzell’s new Jack Bone Detective Series. Not your average detective series, but the Jack Bone series encompasses many genres including paranormal, mystery and thriller.

Jack Bone is a 60year old retired police sergeant who, along with his late friend Tommy Idle, owns Bone Idle Detective agency. With Tommy’s widow Jeannie as his office staff, Jack endeavors to keep his clients happy and well informed. But a recent contract to investigate the last wool mill in the UK for an Asian client will land Jack in the remote and mysterious town of Wolfston where the residents are not quite human. Their existence is the story of legends, and some are quite well known.

Wandering the outskirts of town, Jack soon realizes that there is something different about the residents of Wolfston, with their eerie pallor and menacing gaze. But an invitation to the meet the owner of the mill, will reveal everything that Jack had never wanted to know and more. Promising absolute discretion, Jack returns home only to find that another of his investigations has taken a dark and dangerous turn possibly involving the Russian mob. Hoping that his ‘new’ friends from Wolfston will help, Jack makes a call that will ultimately save his life.

The residents of Wolfston did not take too lightly to Jack’s presence when he first arrived in town. Strangers are never welcome, especially human strangers who did not know about their colorful and varied history. But Jack soon found himself being treated like one of the family, and the Laughton’s of Wolfston protected their own. With Russian gangsters literally gunning for Jack’s head, his investigation will reveal that one of the people responsible for passing information will be just as much at risk as Jack.

The Laughton’s are a very close-knit family with ties to both the famous and the infamous. Historical records are not always correct, but the family kept an accurate accounting of the Wolfston heritage. Revenge for the death of a loved one, would soon bring one of the families most lethal and eldest members to Jack. But the danger to Jack was targeting too close to home, when a phone call reveals, that his family and friend had been taken hostage. And it was up to Jack to ensure that the information he had gathered would help free the people that he loved. But sometimes there is never enough information or time.

THE LAST DREAM BEFORE YOU DIE is a fascinating and different look at a paranormal/mystery/thriller storyline. When I was asked to review this novel, I had no idea what to expect and it is a good thing, because I was impressed the further I got into the book. The initial part of the storyline was slow as Dalzell built up some background information and presented a descriptive narration of the local countryside and the townsfolk of Wolfston, but when our hero is finally confronted, by the people in charge, the story takes off and will keep you mesmerized until the very end. Paul uses many references to classic vampire lore, as well as an interesting twist to a very infamous bad guy in Russian history.

There is some graphically detailed violence in a couple of scenes, but it should be pointed out, that it is necessary to the plot. I applaud Paul Dalzell’s direction of the paranormal storyline-this is absolutely not your mother’s fantasy romance novel. I am looking forward to the next instalment in the Jack Bone Detective series.

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Reviewed by Sandy

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